When

03/11/2013

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When
One door opens
Slamming in your face-
just as your about to 
step threw
Crushing your dreams
In its unforgiving hinges
Locking you out of the place you most want to be

Another one opens
somewhere behind you-
just waiting for you to 
step threw
Drenching your dreams
In the sweet smell of success

 


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Elizabeth Leigh
03/19/2013 9:02am

I really like this poem. I think it wonderful and really cool.

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Noel
06/27/2013 11:23am

I really love this poem! It is very inspirational and can help show someone that there is still hope out there somewhere.

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